Rough Cut Feedback

Positive:

Editing -
-A good use of a variety of shots

Camerawork -
-A good range of shots.
-The running shots are very good as they are disorientating
-Shot behind tree is very professional
-Good use of tripod & hand held camerawork

Sound -
-Very mood setting
-Good music

Mise En Scenc-
- Its good as its in a rural open space, which sets the scene and gives the edge that she doesn't have any escape.
-The setting and shadows look good

Narrative-
-Acting was good. Was believable



Negative:

Editing-
-Title font could be more interesting.
-Black screen isn't interesting
-Try overlapping titles to the film footage.
-Titles look amateur compared to the footage. Because the footage has a faster pace.
-Would look more effective with quicker transitions
-Don't use the word "starring"

Camerawork-
-Frame of strangling isn't clear enough

Sound-
-Sound of heartbeat isn't in sync with the footage
-You could tell when It changed as the music didn't overlap.
-Fade out heartbeat and consider holding it for longer to give it variation.
-Soundtrack is slightly repetitive.

Mise En Scene-
-More establishment of the play area and setting is required
- Location could do with more establishing (but is a good idea overall)

Narrative-
-Some shots not totally clear
-Slightly confusing
-Would have been nice to have had a slightly visible perpetrator of the toucher and chase.