Response to Rough Cut Feedback

some of the feedback was useful, and we can understand why people may say the things they did. for example a number of people commented on the 'swing scene' and how it was difficult to understand what was going on. this is probably true but it was incredibly hard to film it as no one was on the camera, both people were in the scene and the tripod was unattended.

however some of the feedback we received we did think was unfair. for example that the titles were amateur compared to footage and the fade outs didn't work. we thought this was unfair because both of these aspects, our grop believed added to the effect. we suppose it is just a matter of opinion.

i think the most important thing now to focus on is to make it more understandable to others.