Feedback on Final Cut

- Tension
- Chase
- That there film would go back in time and then lead up to the end, which is the beginning.
- Camera work - hand held when running gives sense of unease
- Editing - clear in setting the scenes, titles, effective in creating the thriller effect.
- Sound builds tension. At the end tension from this section is revealed, but not for the entire film.

- Running, Paranoia, scared, the use of cox
- Sub-Genre = Chase Thriller
- nice camerawork, good editing, mise-en-scene okay

- subgenre: horror/psychological thriller
-titles made it look amateur, possibly the font, end title was good though (hitchcock? psycho?)
-diegetic sound was ok
-camera work aws a bit bad in parts, but effective
-last shot was fu*king wicked!

-mysterious thriller- someone being chased
-basic titles-no fade in or out
-rest of film- maybe she continues to be chased, running from someone/something
-Good convention of black & white night mode
- Looks professional, but maybe with some small improvments
-Camerawork could be better

Music

We had feedback on our music, which revealed that it was too repetitive. So we have changed our music to create an entirely new soundtrack.
Our new soundtrack uses a number of different instruments to create an eerie and suspense filled opening (using Garageband).

Thriller Titles

We have been having some trouble with our titles for the opening sequence mainly the style and names. Now we have sorted them out so that they have a good font and the names were taken from a script I have written, so they are completely original.